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Here I lie, forever a prisoner...
not of oppression, not of hate...
but a prisoner of my own dark mind...
forever trapped with no way out.

I bang on the bars...
but nobody comes...
to break me free...
from my own dark mind.

I scream for one...
to come help me...
but here I remain...
a prisoner of my own dark mind.

Why must I be a prisoner?
Why must I be trapped here...
held inside my own taboo...
forever within my own dark mind?

My soul is long broken...
within my dark mind...
it is deteriorating...
slowly breaking down...

So, who will guide me out of my prison?
Who will free me from my own dark mind?
Who out there will be my savior...
to liberate me from my own dark mind...
This poem shows how I feel sometimes about myself occasionally. I just feel like an outsider to some of the people I know in RL. It's kind of one of the more minor reasons why I play on my computer so much.

Tell me what you guys think of this poem.
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i-was-someone-once Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.......

it has this other worldly feel to it...
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emodeathnotegirl22 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
omg i can soooo associate with that!!!!
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